It’s been so long since we parted
But the memory of it
Felt like it was just yesterday
Your smile haunts me to this day
Days, weeks, years pass by in darkness
Between us, I’m the moon
You’re the sun
Without you I can’t shine
Your clothes, your gifts
Everything that reminds me of you
They’re all here with me
I can’t let them go
Traces of you are treasure
Stuff that makes everyday bearable.
The day you left felt like hell
The last smile you gave cursed me
Death is a double edge sword
It’s brings both joy and misery
Now that I’m where you are were
The agony seems worth it
I can once again see your smile
I made you wait all these time
Who am I to refuse now that
you’re here to invite me over
First posted at Cafè Jessica https://cafejessica.wordpress.com/tag/traces-of-you-poem-series/
“Between us, I’m the moon
You’re the sun
Without you I can’t shine”
Those were my favorite words from the poem! This was beautiful! <3
Thank you so much for such precious comment! You pick my favorite lines! ❤️
You’re very welcome! 🙂 <3
Never enough on love and it’s effects. But you did justice to it in the best way you could. Loved it💙💙💙
Thank you for such encouraging words Samyak 🙂
Beautifully written
🥰 Thank you so much!
a beautiful tribute to true love
Thank you so much ❤️ 😊
This is lovely 💕.. Jessica
Thank you so much Sarika ❤️
My pleasure dear 💕
Beautiful ♡ So full of love and longing. Two of my fave things in poetry
♡
💞💓💗 Thank you so much! So happy you liked it 😆
Loved it Jessica✨😍 Its full of Love 🥰🥰🥰 “Who am I to refuse now that
you’re here to invite me over” 🤗✍️ Beautiful lines✨👌
Yes, everlasting love, till death do us part in another form. Thank you so much for reading Simon! ❤️
Very profound and very nice explained what love is all about 🙂
Well done Jess!
❤️ Thank you so much Ribby. Death is feared most of the times but sometimes it can also give hope for those who long to be with someone they lost…
Very true! I just don’t know what’s on the other side and if really we can meet there too…
Yes, but I hate the idea that there’s nothing on the other side and we will never ever meet the people we care for 😥
Well, hopefully on the other side is like in The Good Place, you know the TV Series? 😉
Nope. Never heard of it. But thank you for introducing it Ribby! Sounds interesting! ❤️
Pretty funny 🙂
Love this!
Thank you Lydia ❤️