This is the most vague poem I ever wrote, because even I felt like my head was in the cloud while writing it. So please judge it for me, and what story you get from reading it.
In neighborhoods where you see everything
You’re bound to notice something
Things you wish to unsee,
But I see her.
Each day she cries
Each night she dances under the moonlight
Her lonely shadow squeeze my heart
But her smile hid all the pain inside
If only I can reach her
If only I can hold her hand
If only I can embrace her
If only I can show her
It’s a beautiful life out here
But if only wasn’t too late
Yet no matter how I wish it
I am too late…
The freedom of being trapped!!! This one is very dark, unexpectedly dark if I may say so!
Leave it to being lock in one place for 3 months and every shadows makes you a lot darker.
I know what you mean, however, you have the gift to run free by your words
Haha 😂 true… in my words I’m running wild free 😁
You are!! Love that freedom
Somehow it’s very poignant. It’s just the way of life for me. We see so many things that hurts us and we still go on.. loved it❤️
The sweetest word I’ve read all weekend. Thank you 😁
I think it’s about watching a stranger and knowing they’re too far gone. And you can’t do anything about it because you’re strangers in the end.
Oh my god I think you’ve just hit everything right! Thanks Nour wahh 😍
Sad but beautiful.
Thanks Rob ❤
An opportunity missed…
Yep… so true
Getting lot of sad love stories and in the head! So touching. Well done Jessica 😍✨✍️
Thank you so much Simon… I always appreciate your feedbacks 🙂
Sad but beautiful at the same time! I always told you you have a romantic soul 💕
Sometimes we can’t ignore love even if we want to…our heart cannot be controlled but unfortunately can be heartbreaking 💔
Thank you so much Ribby 💞 I did imagine some kind of romance while writing it … 😁
I get the feeling that this was a poem about somebody you wanted to help in the neighbourhood.
But she either moved away.
Or sadly died.
Oh, it really is somewhere between that lines… and more like death I guess haha